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Red on Black by acday1001 Red on Black by acday1001
I kinda like hair.

This is a piece I did in Dave's class recently, my lovely sleeping ladies :P.

comment, critique, make me work :D

Adobe Ill, CS4- all pentool. Um yeah thats about it.
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Given 2009-01-04
Red on Black by =acday1001 is a vector design that is simple and fluid, captivating the viewer with its strong color contrast and smooth details. ( Suggested by Hellobaby and Featured by lemontea )
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You could put a little more effort in the hands! Well at least with the one it's shown.

I don't like the big lips but thats your style so I think you should go on with it... It could be your personal mark!

Some parts of the hair of both of the girls should be more rounded. You need to work more with the bézier curves.

You could add another shadow in the floor to give more depth to the draw.

The redhead has more details tan the black haired. Anyway I liked very much! The concept is great! I really like the contrast between them!
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:iconrpmmer01:
rpmmer01 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011
Beautiful hair, fantastic!
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:iconpetal-of-destruction:
Petal-of-Destruction Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2011  Student Photographer
Beautiful
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:iconacday1001:
acday1001 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :)
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UnderworldDJ Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
VERY awesome job <3 Love that hair~
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:iconclassicnoir:
ClassicNoir Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010
what kind of medium did you use??
Only computer??
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:iconacday1001:
acday1001 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
I just use a PC and I use Adobe Illustrator CS2 with a Wacom. At home though I do paint, make jewelry, etc.. but I can never photograph them the way I see them so I normally just share my computer work on dA :D
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Lord-Shot Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
nice vector, good contrast between figures and colors
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:iconacday1001:
acday1001 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
thank you I appreciate that :D
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:iconlord-shot:
Lord-Shot Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
your wellcome
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:iconcitybuilder:
citybuilder Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010
nice
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:iconacday1001:
acday1001 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
thanks :D
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:icondhulteen:
dhulteen Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
Fantastic work here!
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:iconacday1001:
acday1001 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
thanks :D
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:iconcorneadesign:
CorneaDesign Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010
WOW!
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:iconacday1001:
acday1001 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :D
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:iconarjunphlox:
arjunphlox Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010  Professional General Artist
lovely!!
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:iconacday1001:
acday1001 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :D
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phoenixleo Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2010
Hello, this deviation was featured in the news article Red - Digital: Categories Unleashed!

Thank you for creating such a great deviation :) And I am glad to have found this piece to feature it :)
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:iconacday1001:
acday1001 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :glomp: that means a lot!
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:iconphoenixleo:
phoenixleo Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2010
you are most welcome :)
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:iconbuckleytypographics:
BuckleyTypographics Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
There's something really great about this. Have you seen the work of Aubrey Beardsley?
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:iconacday1001:
acday1001 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
That's funny because I hadn't prior to creating this piece and then one of my dA buddies pointed it out to me, I think they were showing me "Salome" at the time. Her art is actually really neat, I really like it a lot.
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BuckleyTypographics Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
Just so's you know, Aubrey is a he... a very very decadent he. But wow, what a talent. He's kind of the Oscar Wilde of the illustration world.

This piece reminds me of that same graphic sensibility.

It's very very nice. There are a lot of your pieces I really like, but for my sensibility, this one is really killer.
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ValkeryMillenia Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing!
The smoothness of the details, the contrast and colors and even the color blend are brilliant.
I love the concept and design, and the pose and peacefullness of the picture are awe-inspiring.
The only thing that didn't strike me as perfect is the red-headed girl's face, something seems off somehow, but in general everything is gorgeously perfect.
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acday1001 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thank you, i think her face lost a lot of interest after the brunette's face became so bold. i really appreciate your comment :D
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ValkeryMillenia Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome ^^
YEs I agree that perhaps that was the problem :)
I'm glad you enjoyed my comment.
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chocolettecake Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Student Interface Designer
i love the hair :heart:
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:iconacday1001:
acday1001 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :D
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BlueRoseSD Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2009
I love hair tooo..its so flowy, soft and pretty
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:iconacday1001:
acday1001 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :D
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mathematix Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconloveredplz::iconloveblackplz:
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:iconacday1001:
acday1001 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
:giggle:
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:iconmathematix:
mathematix Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconcheesyplzy:
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:iconmrnicholas:
MrNicholas Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2009  Student General Artist
love this!!
:D
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:iconacday1001:
acday1001 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :D
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:iconmrnicholas:
MrNicholas Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2009  Student General Artist
yur welcome!
:D
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:iconadeee:
adeee Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2009  Student Traditional Artist
their lips are SO tasty looking lol gorgeous linework and colors :D
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:iconacday1001:
acday1001 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :D
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DragonInk7 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2009  Professional Photographer
I like the hair too! :D I featured this in my journal!! Congrats on the DD!
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acday1001 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thank you for the feature :hug: really appreciate it :D
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DragonInk7 Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2009  Professional Photographer
You're welcome!! :hug:
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:iconmatsu-akamaru:
Matsu-Akamaru Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2009   Artist
i like the idea for the picture and the colors.
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:iconacday1001:
acday1001 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :D
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:iconmatsu-akamaru:
Matsu-Akamaru Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2009   Artist
your welcome
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:iconjunkauge:
junkauge Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009
oh, this is amazing just teh color choice its self warrants praise
your awesome!
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:iconacday1001:
acday1001 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thank u so much :D
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:iconjunkauge:
junkauge Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2009
most welcome :)
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:iconacaciathorn:
Acaciathorn Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great collision of bright and dark!
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:iconacday1001:
acday1001 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :D
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TheChavsStoleMeName Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2009
Hmm...

I do like this. It's very nice in the small view, but not so nice in full view, I must admit. Their lips - well, I apologise for being blunt about it, but they look like they're melting. It's a nice concept and everything else is lovely, but really the mouths look kind of bad. Sorry.

Either they're melting, or drooling copiously.
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